tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post7238149673507973108..comments2023-09-02T11:44:14.113-04:00Comments on Peekaboo: JharnaMadhuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03686697183707303538noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-36399081313292842112014-04-14T08:24:54.957-04:002014-04-14T08:24:54.957-04:00Thanks! So true about finding oasis in each other ...Thanks! So true about finding oasis in each other and treating it casually! Madhuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03686697183707303538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-51127411685436902922014-04-13T04:27:49.676-04:002014-04-13T04:27:49.676-04:00Nice! On most days, "One man's meat is an...Nice! On most days, "One man's meat is another man's poison". But it seldom goes unnoticed that the opposite is so true as well. We all find our oases in each other so often but treat it awfully casually too...Balachander Srinivasanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00380978072015881004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-985822652217909612014-04-12T22:07:57.993-04:002014-04-12T22:07:57.993-04:00Thanks Lee! And thank you for stopping by my blog!...Thanks Lee! And thank you for stopping by my blog!Madhuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03686697183707303538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-78542940297934424512014-04-12T22:06:54.401-04:002014-04-12T22:06:54.401-04:00Thanks Jyotsna!Thanks Jyotsna!Madhuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03686697183707303538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-53215152343183269472014-04-12T16:42:00.871-04:002014-04-12T16:42:00.871-04:00Nice bit of storytelling.
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An A to...Nice bit of storytelling.<br /><br />Lee<br /><a href="http://psalmsunday.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">A Few Words</a><br />An A to Z Co-host blog<br />Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-85826083181168763242014-04-12T15:59:57.261-04:002014-04-12T15:59:57.261-04:00Oh Wow.. The last line was actually amazing.. :)Oh Wow.. The last line was actually amazing.. :)Jyotsna Bhatiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12201588215531490861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-22559260726847125152014-04-12T13:38:51.474-04:002014-04-12T13:38:51.474-04:00Thanks Guilie! Definitely was the hardest kind of ...Thanks Guilie! Definitely was the hardest kind of fiction I have written so far!<br />Enjoyed reading your blog, will be stopping by often for sure!<br />A-Z has been fun so far, though it has started to get a wee bit overwhelming. :)Madhuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03686697183707303538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-902311684193462342014-04-12T12:52:17.185-04:002014-04-12T12:52:17.185-04:00POWERFUL! Great job at a flash, Madhu. Like gno112...POWERFUL! Great job at a flash, Madhu. Like gno112 said, revisit it in a couple of weeks and see how you can improve it; flash fiction is a tough one to master, but you've got a fabulous concept here. Thanks for sharing!<br /><br />Thanks for stopping over at <a href="http://guilie-castillo-oriard.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow"> Quiet Laughter </a> yesterday :) How's the A-to-Z treating you so far?Guilie Castillohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09006999087139126972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-66284753266577126112014-04-12T06:23:58.743-04:002014-04-12T06:23:58.743-04:00Thanks Hilary, those are some nice ideas!Thanks Hilary, those are some nice ideas!Madhuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03686697183707303538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-9099650883552259552014-04-12T04:54:28.991-04:002014-04-12T04:54:28.991-04:00Hi Madhu - you could certainly weave lots in here ...Hi Madhu - you could certainly weave lots in here .. the magic of the desert, those stories the mother has to relate, while Jharna herself .. her finding of her origins .. <br /><br />I think you've got lots of opportunities from these five sentences .. clever - cheers HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-29836904750564889602014-04-11T19:37:10.887-04:002014-04-11T19:37:10.887-04:00Thank you, that is encouraging words! And great ad...Thank you, that is encouraging words! And great advice about revisiting the story in a few days!Madhuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03686697183707303538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-28821259609686270632014-04-11T19:18:15.062-04:002014-04-11T19:18:15.062-04:00Thanks Michelle! Definitely see what you mean abou...Thanks Michelle! Definitely see what you mean about a longer story hidden inside.Madhuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03686697183707303538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-23874211002424405602014-04-11T18:04:34.878-04:002014-04-11T18:04:34.878-04:00Yes. This is a very good first attempt. I encourag...Yes. This is a very good first attempt. I encourage you to revisit it and see if you can make it better in a week or two.<br /><br />I love the name, and "The Oasis of Tourists."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-645056790633480976.post-34322303044182635792014-04-11T16:43:17.448-04:002014-04-11T16:43:17.448-04:00This is a very good first attempt st writing a sto...This is a very good first attempt st writing a story. I like it, especially the last sentence. It made a fitting ending. There is a hidden story in this one too, and I'm curious to know how the girl ended up in the desert that caused her nightmares. Maybe you could write a longer version another time. Thanks for stopping by me @ http://www.writer-way.blogspot.comMichelle Stanleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15070440041078195958noreply@blogger.com